Thursday 13th July, 09:29. Telephone enquiry made as to the car DE11 PLN based on advert on Autotrader.co.uk Thursday 13th July, 09:44. BACS Payment of £500 made to North West Autos via mobile banking app. Friday 14th July, 13:45. Telephone call made to North West Autos to request a receipt for deposit. Friday 14th July, 17:15. Further telephone call made to North West Autos to request receipt for deposit. Friday 14th July, 17:58. Receipt for deposit received from North West Autos (This does state deposit is non refundable) Saturday 15th July, 09:38. Entered the North West Autos premises in person to inform them that the contract was to be cancelled. The salesperson provided a business card with an email to provide bank details for refund. Saturday 15th July, 10:52. Email sent as requested with bank details requesting refund. Phone call logs, emails, google map timelines and my option of a statement from my son's supervisor who was present during the sales enquiry who specifically tried to nudge my son around checks to deposit and refund on speakerphone and who was also with my son the following day at work - i.e. he could not inspect the car etc in the timeline due to work. Anything else, please let me know but I think the above is the short timeline and based on fact.

Thanks again - Claim form and Defence Form attached as .pdf file format. Much appreciated! Redacted Claim Form.pdf Redacted defence and counterclaim.pdf

Good Morning, A defence/counterclaim form was submitted by North West Automobiles. Frustrating that the response is based on simple lies around us visiting to inspect the car (the car was quite honestly never seen physically) no inspection took place to approve condition etc. With regard to their terms and conditions, the car was first seen on the autotrader.co.uk website where this dealer has a large presence , their own domain website was only searched out, once we realised that they were not a reputable dealer. The defence also weaves in details of how the proposed purchase does not fall within the The Consumer Contracts (Information, Cancellation and Additional Charges) Regulations 2013.

Thanks for the help again. I will make the revisions as suggested and for the reminder for my oversight with regard to the interest. My son is the claimant. Much appreciated again.

Morning, No further contact since an email to advise they were investigation. Letter of claim above was sent on the 31st July. MCOL account open and I hope to have a sensible, short particulars of claim below ahead of sending on the 14th. I'd be very grateful to hear of any comments or suggestions. Thanks in advance. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The claimant agreed to remotely purchase a used car specifically a Volvo C30, registration plate DE11 PLN from the defendant on the 13th July, 2023. The defendant specifically requested a bank transfer which was made via mobile banking The claimant placed a deposit on the car of £500. The agreement was entered into over the telephone and therefore is subject to the distance selling regulations in place at that time under The Consumer Contracts (Information, Cancellation and Additional Charges) Regulations 2013. The claimant withdrew from the contract 2 days later on the 15th July. The defendant has refused to accept the cancellation of the contract and refuses to return the deposit of £500. The claimant seeks the refund of £500 plus interest pursuant to section 69 County Courts act 1984 plus court costs.

Draft pasted below for ease of review and suggested amendments. DX thanks for the tips on the search function, that method did in fact throw up some useful resources. Northwest Automobiles Blackburn Ltd 4-26 Canterbury Street Blackburn Lancashire BB2 2HP 31 July 2023 Pre action protocol letter of claim. Dear Braeden / Aftersales, Reference: Outstanding refund of £500 deposit in relation to Volvo C30, DE11 PLN. On the 13th of July 2023 I made a BACS Transfer of £500 as a deposit for a used vehicle that was advertised on the Autotrader.co.uk website, vehicle details: Volvo C30, registration number DE11 PLN. This deposit was made remotely via my mobile banking app after being advised by ‘Ahmed’ your salesperson that bank transfer was the only acceptable method of making a deposit. Two days later, 15th July 2023 I informed you of my right to cancel under The Consumer Contracts (Information, Cancellation and Additional Charges) Regulations 2013, whereby I had a 14 day’s cooling off period. I followed up my initial right to cancel to you verbally and via email several times, not limited to 15th, 21st and 26th July 2023, the most recent being the 26th via royal mail recorded delivery and via email. Under the above Regulations, this unequivocally constitutes distance selling and I put it to you that you have failed to satisfy the requirements of the said regulations in relation to distance/off premises sales. I remind you that at no point had I physically viewed the car in person, and I note that one of your email responses dismissed my right to cancel within 14 days’ as you state work had been done to the vehicle. In line with the pre action protocol, I hereby give you 14 days to return my bank transfer of £500. Please note that I am not prepared to accept any other arrangements or compromise and that failure to comply will result in a court claim being issued against you on day 15 from the date of this letter of Claim and without further notice. I am confident in obtaining a judgement against you and this will include at least an order for costs and suitable expenses because of you withholding my £500 deposit that is preventing me unnecessarily from sourcing another vehicle. Yours faithfully, XXX

Letter of Claim attached. I'd be most grateful if someone could kindly review and comment. Thanks again. (Just spotted the tips on best use of search after uploading.) I'll check now and revise if I can see anything to bolster my own effort. Derek CAG Draft Letter Of Claim.pdf

Happy here Apologies, my intention was not to throw away the knowledge and help here or to skew things, far from it. I've run several keyword searches for examples on the forum. I'll try again and do something with my search phrases...

Morning. I'm setting aside some time today to start on the letter as suggested and after reading through a lot of the suggested reading. In terms of a template to work from and I'm not aiming to be spon fed, is this from the which website suitable to use as a model letter? I'm mindful of getting things right from the outset - are the timescales in the template correct, does it cover the basics for me to adapt? Letter before making a small claims court claim - Which? WWW.WHICH.CO.UK Taking a company to the small claims court to get your money back? If so, you must send them a letter before you claim - this template will help you. I have looked for a template on the forum but couldn't seem to locate anything that I thought would be a good fit. Do I need to attach another form for the business to respond to? I have noticed some information that references a response document. Thanks in advance again.

Thanks ever so much to you both for your contributions and guidance. Yes to the slap Something from this made me chuckle thankfully. Letter will be posted before the PO shuts and I will keep you posted. Thank you !

Thanks Dx !! The dealer is a North West Automobiles Blackburn Ltd. Actual car ad is still live here - I can't see any suggestion of deposit concerns on the ad. Auto Trader UK - New and Used Cars For Sale WWW.AUTOTRADER.CO.UK Find your next car with Auto Trader UK, the official #1 site to buy and sell new and used cars. Over 400,000 cars online. Simple, easy, quick! The above is the ad that my son found. Since I suspected I was going to end up in the trenches on this one, they do actually have a statement on their own domain website which does state deposits are non refundable - 3rd paragraph down but this has only come to light after I suspected trouble... Terms and Conditions in Blackburn, Lancashire | North West Autos Blackburn WWW.NORTHWESTAUTOMOBILESLTD.CO.UK Terms and Conditions in Blackburn, Lancashire | North West Autos Blackburn Thanks for taking the time to reply, much appreciated! Derek

Hi All, I wonder with a little more knowledge than me may kindly have a read of my position and offer any thoughts or guidance. My youngest son (20) was a little too keen for his first used car purchase and set out to try to secure a car without my help. In short, a garage in the advertising on Autotrader website listed a used car that my son liked the look of so he placed a call to the garage to ask some questions. This resulted in my son paying a 'deposit' of £500 shortly after his enquiry phone call. The payment was made via mobile banking - bank transfer. I was not privy to the call but when my son called to excitedly tell me he had bought a car I was a little uneasy from offset as when I asked what kind of receipt or paperwork he had received, he said nothing. Payment made following a telephone call on the 13th of July. After I encouraged him to chase for a receipt, toward close of play on the 13th he received an invoice that detailed a car price of £3500, £500 deposit but also with some notes around additional work to be done - MOT, Service, Cambelt and Waterpump change. How relevant this is may be a factor as I explain further. A note on this is the advert at the time detailed this as all being done, it was a selling point and I can evidence the MOT had just been done not post deposit via the .gov website. My son was committed to buy and I actually drove him up the the dealer 2 day's later on the 15th July. As we set-off I checked that my son had made necessary changes with his insurance, where I saw the penny just dropped look on his face with his reply being no. He promptly set-out to arrange cover and literally it took so long, I pulled over just a few hundred yards away from the dealer where my son received the news that the insurance would simply not cover him at all. We sat and tried to work out options to help secure the car, another policy, waiting for 8 weeks for his current policy lapsed to try and retain the no claims for the year but we could not make it work. I may have made a mistake here (hope not) but I drove him to the dealer and physically entered the office to support my son in explaining. We did not and have not any any time actually seen the car with our own eyes and we did not leave the office other than leaving the dealers. My son explained and I supported him and at that point the salesman who had been speaking to my son was polite, friendly and very understanding stating that he would arrange a refund. I know, I know but It didn't feel right to try to camp out and wrestle an immediate refund there and then. On the drive home, my son followed with an email to provide his bank details for the refund and to explain again. This was followed up with another email and phone call the 21st July. Today another email was sent but to which we had our first ever response and it read verbatim " Hi, Thank you for your email. The deposit you placed on the vehicle was nonrefundable deposit as the works have now been completed. We will keep your deposit on our file for future reference if another vehicle comes up that would take your interest" I can share this email and the invoice and any other information that may help provide more information. As I write this ask for input or opinions, I have just put the ended a call with the CAB who took the view that as we physically set foot into the dealers, even though it was to cancel we have effectively nulled out any 14 day cooling off protection, even though we have still not even laid eyes on the car . Hard to swallow but it had crossed my mind as mentioned above about our possible mistake of entering their office... Thanks kindly in advance for taking the time to read this and again further thanks for any input, suggestions or guidance. Derek